Remarks

Remarks09/22/2018 – Bold section headings enhance the work’s overall organization. Recurring Professional Communication (Articulation) concerns are evident with parts of speech, varying issues such as verb form(s), subject-verb agreement, and sentence fluency, varying issues such as run-on sentences, comma splices. These writing concerns diminish the clarity of the response.10/7/18 – Financial institutions’ use of data is adequately presented as a real-world business situation, yet the summary is lacking details particularly how the business situation can be addressed by data collection and analysis. One specific question or scenario for data analysis could not be located.For instruction on describing the relevant data collected, please revisit the section titled “The Case for Quantitative Analysis” in the study plan for this course by clicking on the link located in the top left in this rubric item’s name,“B1. Summary of Data.” 9/22/18 – The submission includes an adequate summary of a real-world business situation regarding financial institutions. The provided detail is insufficient as it is unclear how this business situation can be addressed by collecting and analyzing a set of data, and more specifically a research question is not clearly identified.10/7/18 – The submission provides financial data as relevant data for the analysis. It is unclear whether the described data relates to a relevant business situation. Please review this response for alignment to the business situation once aspect A has been revised9/22/18 – The submission provides a limited discussion on financial data as relevant data for the analysis. It is unclear whether the described data relates to a relevant business situation. Please review this response for alignment to the business situation once aspect A has been revised.10/7/18 – The work provides graphics of processes and generalized financial information as a graphical display of the data collected. It is not clear whether this graphical display is appropriate,as the relevancy of the data collected to the business situation could not be verified. Please review the response to this aspect after revising the data collected in aspect B1.9/22/18 – Two bar graphs are provided as a graphical display. It is unclear whether the provided graphical display is appropriate, as the description of the data collected in aspect B1 is insufficient.10/7/18 – The submission describes several common techniques in the finance realm as the data analysis techniques. It is not clear whether this is an appropriate technique to be used to analyze the collected data. Please review this response for alignment to the data to be collected once aspect B1 has been revised9/22/18 – Numerous possible techniques are described. However, it is unclear whether any of these techniques is appropriate for data that is relevant to the business situation.10/7/18 – The submission provides several examples of how data could be used in finance. The output or any calculation from an analytical analysis is not evident.9/22/18 – The submission provides a discussion around the use of data for financial institutions. The output or any calculation from an analytical analysis is not evident.10/7/18 – The submission explains a background of mistrust with financial institutions. A justification of why a specific analytic technique was chosen could not be located.9/22/18 – The potential benefits from data analysis is described. A logical justification for a chosen data analysis technique could not be found.10/7/18 – The submission provides an explanation with a flow chart for how data plays a role in management. A discussion of the data analysis results is not apparent.9/22/18 – Several techniques are described, including possible uses for financial institutions. Results and discussions about the results of an analytic technique could not be identified.10/7/18 – The work provides a conclusion on data usage in business. A discussion of the limitations of the data analysis could not be found9/22/18 – Two graphs are sufficiently provided. A discussion on the limitations on the attempted analytic technique could not be identified.10/7/18 – The work explains several potentially viable techniques that could be used. A discussion of a recommended course of action based on the analysis results could not be located.9/22/18 – A discussion on the variety of ways that data can be used is noted. A logical recommendation for action based on the results of an analytic technique could not be identified.